An Improvement

See A McGuffin Epiphany for some thoughts on a rewrite. They turned out to be good thoughts.

Once I figured out what could be stolen, I could start rewriting. Some scenes had to go. And I think I miss them in

A mcGuffin Epiphany

Watched Ant Man & Wasp recently. I struggle to keep my writerly “How did they structure that?” hat on. If the story’s even half-decent, I’m totally caught up in it, and find it very hard to take a dispassionate view of how it was structured.

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