This is brilliant.

From Mike_IE

the general formula for a basic <30 word logline/outline:

protagonist + incident + conflict + goal

Oh. My. Goodness.

I get so caught up in details, I overlook the Big Simple that lurks behind summaries and loglines.

"Two women in 1849 cross the American southwest following rumors of uncanny events. Hounded and trapped by fanatics, they find a way to disrupt the horrors being summoned from beyond the veil the isolates our realm."

Maybe I'll start with a version of this for my next query.


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